06-10-2020, 01:03 PM
All the updates look same..same guilt, remorse and sanya as usual always a dead rubber..
Kuch to nayapan lao bhai..Sanya ko kabhi to khulke dikhao...hamesha ek hi pattern pe jate ho..
It doesn't look erotic rather looks koi dukh bhari kahani hai..
Don't doubt your writing skills..it's too good..but it's plain and boring..
Plz do incorporate suggestions given to you earlier..
Kuch to nayapan lao bhai..Sanya ko kabhi to khulke dikhao...hamesha ek hi pattern pe jate ho..
It doesn't look erotic rather looks koi dukh bhari kahani hai..
Don't doubt your writing skills..it's too good..but it's plain and boring..
Plz do incorporate suggestions given to you earlier..