12-03-2019, 01:45 PM
Quote:RoyalRajveer
Neelamji jab story achvhi hoti hai to readers ka sath milega hi milega ! Ye writer ki apni kabiliyat hai ! Jo ki aap hai !
Dhoodh wale ki entry achchi thi but jo maza us anjaan mein hai wo apne aap me tarife kabil hai ! Use jyada focus dedi to or bhi achcha ban padega.
Story ke update aap ko roj deni hai ya weak me char ye to aap ke upar nirbhar hai , jo bhi de shandar de !