Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

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Well, my comment was mostly based on the woman's day line. Please take it easy.
Otherwise I don't comment on the plot.

Agreed on the plot. You have absolutely no reason to explain your plot , its your story and your thread and you can write as however you want, really appreciate you for taking time to write such a good story. 
My comments were purely out of love for your story , All in all if we weren't so attached to the plot we wouldn't be here commenting in the first place , which I have no record of doing earlier (I was always a silent spectator and your lead character's name plays a very important part in my life , only reason I got so attached to this plot )