Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[Yampag]

Hi, Royalking..
Enjoying your story very well.. very good narration.. find very much erotism.. in slow progression and dialogues before the action and during the action...
Though started with the story with Lead character of Namrata and surprised us by Suchitra's development with Abdul and that too much fast she opened up with Abdul..
And now she is unstoppable... Very much interesting...
As a reader I am OK with both the characters.. But it is upto you which one you want to focuss on more or develop both simultaneously.
But don't take any of the characters towards blackmailing... 
It's your guts to kill the watchman in the story.. let's see any other character is coming in his cabin or not..
Though I like the story very much.. but later when found that Abdul is a doctor.. I am bit disappointed.. I thought at that time he will be some other person of the society like secretary or doing some normal job or doing some business.. but no complaint.. we wish the story continue with such erotism for long time..
See you soon with lovely dick raising episodes...