12-09-2020, 05:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-09-2020, 05:50 PM by mindset00007. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(11-05-2020, 09:54 AM)bforb Wrote: Unnecessarily degraded story with lots of characters and meaning less dialogues.
I didn't realize your advise during that time. Now I am feeling very difficult to co relate every thing unless, I read the story again. I am reading the story along with a new story. I will finish the new story quickly. I restart this story and ill try my level best to justify the character. Thank you for your criticism. You are welcome to comment on my new story.