10-03-2019, 04:18 AM
(09-03-2019, 10:54 PM)krish_999 Wrote: I have read all the criticism written by many readers here but I am not replying to any of them because I am confident of winning them back. Every event is happening exactly as I have planned long ago. If there's one thing that actually worries me, that's the fact I have still not recovered my writing flow even after three chapters. The part which involved the communication between Anvita and her FIL was actually written a few weeks ago.
Now coming to the above-quoted line from your comment; it definitely made me stop and rethink my action. At first, I felt yes, it's such an irony that this painful episode came on International Women's Day. Then I thought (for my own comfort) that the Women's day was yesterday. Your particular line made me sit and think, to be honest.
The fact is that I have never thought Anvita as a perfect woman. Neither she is a whore. She is just a woman. 'Just' doesn't mean 'weak'. I'd like to say Atul/George is 'just' a man. Like Rajyavardhan told her, to err is human. And what makes a woman/man strong is the will to undo/deal with that error. The so-called woman's day doesn't guarantee safety to any woman on earth, does it? Everyone, whether it's man or woman, lives with the possibility to fail and fall. But what makes one different from the pack is the will to get up and win.
I am not saying Anvita is the woman with that will. I am saying that this error might not be enough to write her off. This error might not be enough to write off any woman. Any error might not be enough to write off anyone. Because, in the end, what matters is what a particular mistake did to them.
Thank you for making me log in back and write a few lines here. You made me think about something I wouldn't otherwise have.
Thank you for all others too, for reading and commenting. I welcome negative and positive comments alike because they make me help improve myself. That's actually one of the great things about Xossipy: you get what your readers think about your story, almost immediately.
Krish.
Thanks for expressing your views behind the plot. Would like to point out one thing , my views to write off Anvita is not purely one single episode esp. not the last one. I have always been one of the very few who believed its more Atul's fault than Anvita , but lately Anvita seems to lack energy or the will to defend her marriage , It would be a pleasure reading any story when our house wife is pushed to the edge and submission , Its just that these last few episodes were not convincing enough. Simple fact that she is literally bangd by George and Anvita suffered the abuse taking down with out a fight is so out of plot and shows the peaks of desperation Anvita is in at the moment.
I would love her to come up and solve her problems yet that would mean no fun for all the male characters :P .
My comment on women's day was mostly for pun , Please don't read too much into it. We all know none are safe if its Women's day or not.