Adultery No One Dies a Saint (Completed)

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Guys relax and take it lightly, it is just a part of the story and every story has some up's and down's, We need to swim with the waves.

Every body is entitled to give their opinion positive or negative. 
I don't mean to offend writer in any way, but point out flaws as is , as a reader. It is my point of view out of love for this story. Author's writing skills are unparalleled and the plot built so far is so good.