09-03-2019, 09:18 PM
Time to leave reading this story. I have seen enough transformation of a strong willed lady to a degraded and helpless Anvita. Irony is such humiliation on women's day lol. If she can fight Rajat so easily I don't think she has to succumb to George especially when he is a friend of FIL and she should have brains to understand and ask George for further time, FIL could have solved this.
Either portray your lead lady as a strong willed women who did everything in her power to avert submission or show her as a slut intending to have sex at every opportunity. Your plot dwindles between desperation and aggressiveness of Anvita which is confusing every one. I can totally relate her encounter with Prithvi , as she likes him a lot and even the strongest has a weak moment when it comes to the people who they like. After all this venting out frustration , I still appreciate your thoughts around this story and your writing skills to entertain us all these days. Good Luck Anvita! No sympathy or empathy for you anymore , you have now surely sinned.
Either portray your lead lady as a strong willed women who did everything in her power to avert submission or show her as a slut intending to have sex at every opportunity. Your plot dwindles between desperation and aggressiveness of Anvita which is confusing every one. I can totally relate her encounter with Prithvi , as she likes him a lot and even the strongest has a weak moment when it comes to the people who they like. After all this venting out frustration , I still appreciate your thoughts around this story and your writing skills to entertain us all these days. Good Luck Anvita! No sympathy or empathy for you anymore , you have now surely sinned.