07-09-2020, 01:23 AM
(07-09-2020, 12:33 AM)pylode Wrote: Kya chooth-fad kahani likhte ho yaar! Kaushik ki is thread ne is mature couple ke lund fuddi mein ekdum hulchul macha dee
Jis thareh Madhu aur writer har samay ek dusre ke prati pyaar jatate hai, ek dam manmohak hai bhai!
Par ek baat: chudai kreeda ke beech beech kuch aur maadak baatein aur story-line bhi daalo, taaki kahani ek chudai se direct doosri chudai may na jaye.
Story ka strong point: Yahan husband ke POV (point of view) se likha narration ek sacche cuck ke mind ko darshata hai.
pylode