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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#19
Update 6


Mene apne appko shant kiya or fir sochne lagga ki kya karu jisse mea us par ja saku..

Na mea kisi b chij ko as a bridge use kar sakta hu or na he mea jump kar ja sakta hu qki us mayavi chudail nea apne tilism sea waha ki gravity bada di hea..

Kuch der sochne par  b muje koi rasta nai najar aaraha tha us nadi ko par karneka..

Muje lagne lagga ki mea us khanjar ko nai paa sakunga tabi mene gusse mea sand ko mutti me pakad kar lava ke nadi mea phenka..

Or jo mene dekha ussea mea chaunk gaya tha..

Ab aage

Jaise he wo sand lava par giri vahi tehar gayi kuch minute ke liyea or fir niche chali gayi lava mea..

Issea muje idea aaya or meane khade hokar jungle se ek badaor jadda sa ped tod kar layya or usse apni talwar se karkar ek badda or chouda favda banadiya jisse mea sand ko lava me daal saku..

Faavda banane ke baad mene apni puri taqat se usse sand mea andar tak gusaya fir usse daka dete huye kinare par lakar jitni b sand jama hui usse lava mea daal diya..

Aisa kai baar karne ke baad or lava ki nadi or kinare ka level same hua bas fark ye tha ki nadi mea lava ke jagha sand thi..

Ab bas muje jaldi se isse paar karna tha..

Qki lava kabi b sand ko apne sath baha leja sakta tha..

Fir mene apni speed se us nadi ko paar kiya..

Sand kafi daram hochuki thi lava ke wajase par fir b mea usse sehen kar paa raha tha bas mere per jal chuke the..

Dusre taraf pohach kar mene apne bag mea se healing water nikal jo ki mene training ke doran use karta tha apne gaav barne ke liye..

Mene wo pani ka ek gut pi liya jisse mere pair b tk hogaye or mea ab pehlea se jadda fresh feel kar raha tha..

Hard training ke wajase mera stamina kafi bad chuka tha isliye mea agar pure din b doudta rahu fir b ni tahkta tha..

Jaise he pair tk huye..


Meane apne aapko sayi kiya or fir us jungle mea east disha ke taraf chlane lagga..

Muje is waqt malum ni tha kis disha me janna he muje par fir b muje lag raha tha ki east direction he sahi hogi qki suraj ki pehli kiran se he muje wo talab dikhega or suraj east side se aata he hea isliye me ussi disha mea chalne lagga..

Kuch dur jaane par fir muje wahi pedo ka saamna karna padda jinhe mene aaram se jalakar khak kardiya..

Abi suraj ugne me sirf 1 ghanta bacha tha..

Mere pass kafi kam samay tha isliye mea teji se aage badne lagga..

Abi mea kuch dur he gaya tha ki muje bhediye ki awaje aayi..

Par bhediye ke awaj mea me dard mehsoos kar paa raha tha..


(Muje sabi janwaro ki language aati he yaha tak insano me b jitni b language ho wo b..

Ye sab mene training ke doran grantho se sikha tha)

Isliye mea teaji us disha me chalne lagga..

Me thoda aage aaya tha ki muje wo bhediya dik gaya uske per ke aarpar ek badda sa katta gussa hua tha..

Mea jaldi se uske pass gaya or uske pair ko jispar katta lagga tha usse apne hatho me pakda or bhediya se kha..


(Yaha mene uski language mea baat ke thi par hindi mea bataunga)..

Aaryan - Daro mat mea tumhari madat kar sakta hu..


Bas tum shant raho..

Bhediya pehlea toa muje apni basha bolta dek chaunka par is waqt usse dard b kafi horaha tha isliye usne meri baat mani or shant hogaya..

Mene uske pair se katte ko ek he baar me khich kar nikla jisse usse or dard hua par fir b wo usse control kar raha tha tabi..

Mene apne bag se healing water nikala or usse ek gut pila diya..

Jisse uske per ka gaav kuch he der me tk hogaya..

Ab wo puri taraha fit hochuka tha..

Bhediyene khade hote huye mujse kaha..

Bhediya - Shukriya meri madat karne ke liyea..


Mera naam rakha hea or mea is jungle ke bhediyon ka sartaj hu..

Tum yaha ke toa ni hoa..

Tumhe yaha se jaldi chale jana chahiye anyata wo Zoya chudail tumhe b yaha kaid kar ke apna gulam banadegi...

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta mat karo..


Mea yaha wo jaduyi khanjar lene aaya hu..


Kya tum muje bata sakte ho wo talab kaha he jaha wo khanjardasha hua hea pathar mea..

B rakha - Tumne meri madat ki he isliye tumhe zarur batunga par uski raksha wo Zoya kar rahi hea...

Or aaj tak usse koi nai harra paya he kewal us khanjar ke malik ko chodkar..

Isliye us khanjar ki wo raksha kar rahi hea taki apne malik ke aane par wo khanjar unhe lota sake..

Aaryan - dhanyawad dost bas muje waha ka rasta batado tum qki suryoday se pehle muje waha pohach na hoga..

B rakha - Chalo fir tum meri pit par bet jaau..


Mea tumhe waha jald he pohacha dunga..


Par mea us zoya se ladne mea tumhari koi madat ni karunga qki mere saare log uske tilism mea fase huye hea..

Mea chahkar b unhe ni bacha sakta..

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta na karo..


Tumhare logon ko b uske tilism se chuda dunga..

Itna bol mea uski pit par beth gaya or wo rakha teji se doudne lagga.

Or kuch hi der doudne ke baad wo ruka or mujse bola .

B rakha - Yaha se tumhe akele he jana hoga..

Issi disha mea kuch dur chalne par tumhe us mayavi chudail ka ashiyana dikhayi dega..


Uske tk piche he wo talab he jaha wo khanjar laga hua hea..

Rakha ki baat sun mene usse ek baar or dhanyawad kaha fir uss disha mea chalne lagga..

Aage ka update raat mea dunga..


Pls give urs reviews frnds..


N agar aapko story achi lagge toa pls rate b kar deana
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RE: MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER) - by Aaryan99 - 03-12-2018, 12:54 PM



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