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Bhalo update but r ektu better asha korechhilam apnar theke. Update ta pore ja ja mone eseche motamuti mr. fantastic,isiift and nilr1 bole diyeche. but tao ami koekta point bolchi..
1.Sanjay k r o confident kore tulun. Sanjay er kaj kormo dekhe 15yrs er bacha mone hochhilo. Koekta jaigai sanjay er r o confident hoya  uchit chhilo...jemon jokhon or maa ok proposal ta dichilo 1st ei or bola uchit chilo manbo na...karon manle tumi abar bhulbhal loker kache jabe takar jonno. Or maa kokhon doya kore clarify korbe bepar ta sei ashai bose na theke okhanei clear kore naoa uchit chhilo. 

2. jeta lokjon sobche besi bolche.....Sumitra k sex er part tai khub passive mone hoyeche....Ager baje blackmail scene gulor por asha korechhilam sanjay sumitra k claim korbe and sumitra nijer ichai actively seta manbe.....eta oder internal monologue a atleast dekhate parten....ete Sanjay er and amader mane reader der Sumitrar opor raag onekta komto. D:)

3. Eta oto ta important na. Amra cholti banglai oto sudho bangla word use kori na,but ekhane sanjay and sumitra kotha bolar somoi ba erotic scene guloi boddo besi sudho bangla use korchhilo jegulo porte ektu odd ba bemanan lagjilo.mane dhorun thapanor somoi k bole je joni te lingo probesh korachhi...    XD.

Emni te bhalo update diyechho ostad :) ...egulo just mone holo tai bollam.....chaliye jan and thanks for the update yr):