31-08-2020, 09:29 AM
(31-08-2020, 09:01 AM)veenaimo Wrote: 1) Veettu velakara paiyan kooda kavitha pannra maathiri.. first ilai marai kai marai-a...Excellent... you can write your own story... nice plot... i will write soon....Thanks
i) Intha vela kara paiyan lungi mattum thaan kattuvan.. kavitha-va akka-akka-nu koopiduvaan.. mela onnum poda maattaan, ullaiyum onnum poda maataan, purushan munnaadiye avan lungi-la ulla tent-a paathu rasippa.. but purushan kitta solluva.. enga avanukku nallatha naalu jatti vaangi kodukkanum, paavam jatti vaanga kooda kaasu illaama irrukkaan-nu. But purushan antha pakkam poanathum iva settaya aaramichuudvaa
ii)husband bathroom ulla ponathum, velakaara paiyan lungiya avuthu OOMBI viduva. Husband kulitchuttu veliya varalaam-nu paappaan, paatha hall-la pondaatti oombi vittu-ttu irruppa.. so ivan bedroom-kulla avanga mudikkura varaikkum wait pannuvaan. Ippo pondaatti ulla varuvaa, moonjila anga anga thick-a kanji irrukkum, purushan keppaan enna-nu, athukku namma vela kara paiyan payasam koduthaan(kovil prasadham) nu solli avan munnaadi scoop panni naakki, appdiye innoru kannathula ullatha scoop panni, purusha-ku ootti viduvaa.. "inthaanga, naan neenga irrukkathu maranthuttu ellaathaiym naane saapttten.. ithu than kadaisi vaai"
iii) Konjam konjam-ma ilai marai kaai marai poi , konjam open-a ve ellaam pannuva.. like kissing him for some good work in front of husband.. Lungi eerama irrukku-nu , purushan munnadiye avan lungi-a avuthu vittutttu.. " akka-kku munnadi enna da vetkkaam.." solli konjam neram ammanama sutha viduvaa..
We can discuss lot more.