28-08-2020, 03:20 PM
Good start but please check for the correctness of the words being used and sentences also. It confuses the story line like "touching my dare bare skin", " constructed at hot heart of the city", "get in the left lift".
This is not to discourage you but a mere suggestion and value addition.
Keep going, good luck
This is not to discourage you but a mere suggestion and value addition.
Keep going, good luck
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