27-08-2020, 10:43 PM
(27-08-2020, 08:11 PM)Sunny8488 Wrote: Dear Writer, thanks for the story it's a very good narration. I have few specific comments. Both sisters undermined Saumya's husband and don't care about him. They decided themselves on pregnancy and proceeded, it's wrong! They are in my perspective, not a value based wife's, rather demoralised. Suamya decided and come to a conclusion without efforts that she can not change her husband and shown more interest to fuck with brother in law! At any point of both sisters had no remorse at all.
So, how you treat this behaviour in story in the future? Is Saumya happens to be barren women and her husband goes with other woman, what's her feelings?
My conclusion is both sisters are opportunists more so sluts! No values. So, how can Saumya respect her husband in future? If he comes to notice what was happened and how Saumya betrayed, what would be his reaction and Saumya?
She deserves to be punished!
Thanks
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