Adultery The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute
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(26-08-2020, 06:51 AM)Theflash Wrote: Chill out man 

Xossipy is filled with stories that are so so so boring 
dull
humdrum
lifeless
monotonous
mundane
stodgy
tedious
tiring 
That's it i cannot find more synonyms to that word. 

All have almost similar plot like
 1)high class women low class men 
 2)innocent female devious male
 3)brother - sister, mother-son, DIL - FIL, interfaith, cuckold husband, cuckold son ETC
 I cannot recall more types
And all have plots or consequences which are senseless
For instance
 1)only females are cheating 
2) husbands dick are smaller than lovers
 3) husband is always working so wife is lonely loses self control dealing with domineering womanizer servant/driver whatever he is and I have thought a lot in my past that if that servant or driver is also working in this household than by similar situation his wife must be cheating too.
4)most of the time female is young like below 25-30 and male is 50-60,I mean like what the fuck why don't the female leads fuck their fathers
5) cheaters are never caught
 6) if you leave out few stories than when they are caught either husband turns into cuckold or story is abruptly stopped
  7) spelling mistakes, grammatical errors.                                
 8)i am not sure but I think 45% completed stories have same thing in  common other 40%stories are never completed only 15% are worth calling a sexstories coz they have a DIFFERENT or GOOD PLOT and it includes SEX.
 9) and I too have been reading stories from many years then it was no big deal but now just reading the titles is enough to know what that stories is.
 10) even these stories which contains no theme are restarted, or have been continued by various others 
 11) look at the comments in those stories merely 3 to 5 sentences are noticeable if you are lucky or its just Update?
12) just try to post constructive criticism or your thoughts same way as you have done here on those stories the authors get angry, childish on the other hand atleast fewer writers which by sensible definition can be atleast called writers like manasi, krish999, nefws, devil mercy, kamdev99008 and other have mature conversation with readers.

There are lot of points but I think you get the idea. 

So atleast we can enjoy a sexstory which is Sex within the Story and in addition to that 
1)proper grammar no spelling mistakes                       2)completed story
3)maybe new or different plot
4)Which has aftermath of the story and i believe this is the vital reason breville and manasi have written there stories coz the prequel didn't include any ending or aftermath. 

So lets encourage the writer bro 
No hard feelings 

And to the writer please carry on

AGREE
we are here for entertainment..........seeking a complete logical story.....
be it real or fantasy...........it doesn't matter 

i am not interested in reading..........bloody fucktales consisting endless fucking
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RE: The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale - a tribute - by kamdev99008 - 27-08-2020, 02:33 AM
33.1 - by manasi - 23-11-2020, 07:01 AM
33.2 - by manasi - 25-11-2020, 06:22 AM
33.3 revised 26-11-2020 - by manasi - 27-11-2020, 11:13 AM
33.4 final - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:26 AM
after chap 33 - by manasi - 29-11-2020, 06:46 AM
RE: after chap 33 - by kamdev99008 - 29-11-2020, 10:28 AM
34.1 - by manasi - 08-12-2020, 09:32 PM
34.2 - by manasi - 09-12-2020, 09:36 PM
34.3 - by manasi - 10-12-2020, 10:03 PM
34.4 - by manasi - 11-12-2020, 08:30 PM
34.5 - by manasi - 12-12-2020, 09:45 PM
RE: 34.5 - by kamdev99008 - 13-12-2020, 01:42 AM
34.6 - by manasi - 14-12-2020, 09:46 AM
34.7 - by manasi - 15-12-2020, 07:21 PM
34.8 - by manasi - 17-12-2020, 09:50 AM
34.9 - by manasi - 18-12-2020, 06:48 AM
35.1 - by manasi - 26-12-2020, 06:57 PM
35.2 - by manasi - 30-12-2020, 09:09 AM



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