20-08-2020, 06:40 PM
(12-08-2020, 09:24 AM)Fuckstar Wrote: Hi dosto,Nice plot,just have few observations if you like it then you can add those in your story.
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Sugandha ki Sugandh https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=29576
1.Do not show Sugandha as bold hungry for sex kind of girl instead show her little bit of naive,shy towards sex.
2.You can focus more on relationship between sugandha and fransis sir where he interested in giving her personal tutions for study instead they enjoy sex sessions.
3.Let fransis seduce her slowly on daily basis instead of quick sex.If she looses virginity too early there won't be much addition in the story.
4.And in the character of baluram may be he enjoy her later on.