02-12-2018, 08:42 PM
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Thanks for that extremely long and exciting conclusion. So vividly written that the reader can really feel a that they were a part of it. Anand's slow and delicious arousal of Sanjana shows his mastery of the art.
Keeping her waiting on the edge, making her call Vivek, making him ask for his wife to be fucked, making them both want Anand to fuck her, was incredibly erotic and full of suspense, breaking down the last walls of the traditional relationship.
Vivek's arousal imagining Sanjana fucking with another man is not a particularly unique characteristic defining a cuckold. It is very normal, a common fantasy, to be aroused watching a naked woman, watching a naked woman having sex (porn watching) or pleasuring herself. However, the intrigue and interest in this story is how Vivek and Sanjana end up actually enjoying that fantasy. Personally, I had hoped that somehow this would be avoided, as can be understood from my various comments but I accept that that would have made for a less enthralling story.
Also, I feel that making Vivek lick and suck out Anand's cum from Sanajana's pussy could have been left out, even though I know many like that as part of humiliating the husband. Vivek having been in the room with them, having enjoyed watching them could have been used to engage in threesome play of various kinds without bringing in humiliation. Anyway, by Anand ultimately making both husband and wife agree and enjoy having him fuck Sanjana was already the ultimate humiliation of a along held and loving husband/wife relationship.
Anand's magnanimity was simply awesome in the end. By Anand not actually keeping Sanjana as his mistress, by him deciding to go to Britain and giving Sanjana and Vivek back their job and financial security, was an incredible gift for allowing him to take his pleasure. The ending went a long way to satisfying the cuckold hungry hordes and die hard traditionalists alike. The bull became a bulbul??!! Ha!
As for who came back for the gold contact card, it could be either one of them but my pick is Sanjana, though I'm sure many would say Vivek. After all he was the one that wanted the fantasy. But he did manage to keep things in check for a very long time which is typically the case for most husbands. Though he did get his satisfaction in the end too, it was primarily driven by their financial situation. Certainly his own fantasies crept in too.
Sanjana, on the other hand, was systematically brainwashed by Anand such that in the end she literally went berserk to have her satisfaction. She tasted something she would never get from her husband (however, thanks to the writer for letting him have a decent sized cock and being a decent fucker), something that she began craving for maniacally. So now that Anand has effectively done his "wham bam thank you mam", I think she will miss him a lot, a lot more than Vivek (who now has a sexually wild and totally satisfying wife).
Anyway, thanks for a really great story and certainly looking forward to other stories that you may write.