Adultery Betrayals & Sacrifices...

[worldlover]

this update is so much confusing................
neither they talked about the reasons behind their physical relationship with their boudi binisha
neither the exposed involvement of their mother in this betrayal episode
neither they shown any disrespect towards arjun....instead they portrayed him as their ideal

i think you are creating unnecessary suspense by skipping natural topics in conversations also skipping interactions
most important thing you skipped is binisha's POV

you remembered me of a famous writer from xossip...also a respected member of this forum too......... BhaiyaJI
his style of narration is same...........every update is unconnected with previous and next ones........... just to make readers confused

now what can we do...except wait & watch ................

so...............................update fast
waiting eagerly for the next update

Brother the story just started. I just want everyone to know what the characters think about themselves. The mother and binisha's pov will also come. But before that a few incidents needs to happen and a few characters needs to be introduced. We don't need to agree but if we can still relate to the motives of each character then I think is called a proper character building. Sorry,  but if the updates were not so small then it would not have felt unnecessary suspence. So, I am also the guilty party here.
I will just ask for your patience here and try to regularly update the story so that you guys will not be bored of the slow pace. 
Thank You...