16-08-2020, 09:24 PM
this update is so much confusing................
neither they talked about the reasons behind their physical relationship with their boudi binisha
neither the exposed involvement of their mother in this betrayal episode
neither they shown any disrespect towards arjun....instead they portrayed him as their ideal
i think you are creating unnecessary suspense by skipping natural topics in conversations also skipping interactions
most important thing you skipped is binisha's POV
you remembered me of a famous writer from xossip...also a respected member of this forum too......... BhaiyaJI
his style of narration is same...........every update is unconnected with previous and next ones........... just to make readers confused
now what can we do...except wait & watch ................
so...............................update fast
waiting eagerly for the next update
neither they talked about the reasons behind their physical relationship with their boudi binisha
neither the exposed involvement of their mother in this betrayal episode
neither they shown any disrespect towards arjun....instead they portrayed him as their ideal
i think you are creating unnecessary suspense by skipping natural topics in conversations also skipping interactions
most important thing you skipped is binisha's POV
you remembered me of a famous writer from xossip...also a respected member of this forum too......... BhaiyaJI
his style of narration is same...........every update is unconnected with previous and next ones........... just to make readers confused
now what can we do...except wait & watch ................
so...............................update fast
waiting eagerly for the next update