02-12-2018, 07:51 PM
Quote:ramdar2017
My friend don't have words to encourage as I have already said you have a good novel skill
But one thing the beauty of your story is the way of making arousal
How sanjana is arousing
The words and acts which are taking sanjana and vivek to next stage of arousal
Especially the sesstions one when samaja preparing for and arrival day
Second one after anand arrival
And third one when sandya stepped in with whisky with tight jaket and in skirt
Especially your words "sanjana eyes fluttering"
Heaving bosom
"Looking vivek from corner of eye
"Acts keeping strain of Jasmin in hear cleavege"
"Keeping his hand on sanjana thighs"
"Sanjana saying "sir regering vivek"
"These are arousal triggers"
Your journey of arousal is highly toxicatig