11-08-2020, 11:31 AM
(08-08-2020, 09:27 AM)manasi Wrote: Thank you Sir on your commemoration. Please go ahead to reproduce the prelude.
I will appreciate you to add a few lines on your views on the first paragraph. The views you generate (the unforced one) without going into details whatever followed subsequently.
Here is the first paragraph from that story - check the font color (highlight)
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CHAPTER 1: Wives, cuckolding, emasculation, humiliation, pregnancy
My name is Manu Sharma, 40 years old, one of the respectable hardworking guys you might have
known in your own lives. This is a multi-part story revolving around incidents over a period of 7 months,
during which I went from being an inadequate husband to a completely emasculated cuckold. It is hard
to write a story from the beginning, many years in retrospect, as I am doing now. It is easy to argue in
retrospect that had I done things differently at this stage, or that stage, I could have prevented some of
the things that happened. Likewise, it is easy to reflect on incidents, so many years after they happened,
on what I might have done wrong in those circumstances, knowing how things unfolded later. Also,
using the knowledge of what happened later to describe what happened at a point in time also fails to
capture the powerful feelings I went through during those experiences. I will try my best to make an
effort to not describe what happened in the future, while describing any given part of the story.
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