07-08-2020, 04:33 PM
(07-08-2020, 02:04 PM)Uday Wrote: Yes, I in agreement with Kamdev
Your story and narration is superb and touching the hidden emotions of wifeyv and mother calling him when he missed the routine without any prior information and mother sensing some thing bad either it may be the accident or the incident of betrayal or could the watchman told about his visit and his condition and they are acting to cover it up....keeping us guessing
The better part is the true feeling of a husband on betrayal and not showing the cuckold nature.
Yes, please give some big updates....if possible
I would love to give bigger updates.I have the story figured out as to which path I want the story to go. But typing in a mobile takes too much time. That's why I don't give bigger updates. Please bear with me. Hope all of you like the story. Thanks for your support. Thank you all.