ஒரு குடும்ப பெண்ணின் பரிதவிப்புகள்
(06-08-2020, 10:44 AM)manigopal Wrote: ஒரு குடும்ப பெண்ணின் பரிதவிப்புகள்
--- intha title ku ethathu pola thaan irunthuthu but last post  #102 matum ivale wanted ah okay solrathu pola irunthuthu... whole story base line was avaluku vera vazhi ilama accept paniktathu pola but last post apdi ilama ...irunthathu something missing pola iruku.,

when it goes like she also wanted it then its kind of normal LUST stories., so try to make the way the story line needs.,

even apartment queen jothika also started well but it also made like she wantedly goes for it. I dont want this story to go the same way.

Hope you may re-write it.

Will try.
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RE: ஒரு குடும்ப பெண்ணின் பரிதவிப்புகள் - by hupsar02 - 06-08-2020, 03:28 PM



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