Adultery Beautiful Wife Neha and Ugly Paanwala - Story Continued

[swap_neel]

You have made Neha a real slut.So the excitement of this story has lost. So it is my last comment of this story.Good bye.

I too felt after initial shaandar start (- may be the author is not concentrating more or has less time to write) the story has derailed. There is no description of return journey, and 1st night (or first few nights) @ home with Nishith, No conversation between savi n Nishth till after 2 weeks or so as described here, Neeha has the SD card of hot pics - then why she or savi not interested to hv a look or @ least some convo about it for so long.... such n more things like this in last 2-3 parts make the story more filmy style n lose the intimate style of interactions betwen Nish, Neeha, savi, n chedi. Really disappointed that after such promising start, author has let the story drift away. Hope he could rewrite some by adding flashbacks etc