06-08-2020, 10:02 AM
Just one suggestion, it is ok that Mona is not an escort and will not do sex for money but in modelling profession women do sex for bagging assignments or pleasing clients. You can think of introducing that. This is only a suggestion to make it more realistic.
Your story and writing is great. Keep it up keeping Mona as the central character.
Your story and writing is great. Keep it up keeping Mona as the central character.