04-08-2020, 04:44 PM
(04-08-2020, 04:32 PM)Montu_goo Wrote: Thanks
Par koi aur reply nhi deta agar log apna view denge to me aur ache se likh paunga kyuki usse kami pata chal payegi ki aur kya kya improvement karne ki jarurat hai
Bhai,chudai ki thodi details do....is story mei tumne itni baar chudai karwai lekin bahut kam details diye..erotica hamesha description pe chalti h...ek hi chudai karwao...par detail mei....aur bahar logo se chudwao to turant nahi...thodi mehnat kar k...kyu ki aurat itni jaldi maan jaaye ye realistic nahi lagta....jitne bhi acche writers hote h...wo psychology of woman n man ko khoob exploit karte h