A wedding ceremony in village

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Logan

I just complete your story, mujhe khna pdega, you are a amazing writer, no one can explain situation like you do, narration jo aap likhte hai wo kamaal ki hai, phdne wala koi bhi word skip nhi kr sekta.
aapki kahani m mujhe jo sabse achi baat lagi wo hai aapka ek positive massage (achai aur burai ka fark batana) dena. 

xossipy k iss platform pr jaha sab apni life m se kuch kimti waqt nikal kr yaha ek aise fantasy jite hai , jisse wo kisi se share nahi krte.

aapki kahani m mera favorite character - SHOBHA the BRIDE



Best scene - Bheema - Shobha 



Jab aap reader se writer bante hai to waqt aur bhi kam ho jata hai kisior ki rachna ko padhne ka, aap khud ki rachnao m ulajh kr rh jate hai,  
ek lambe samay se maine koi stroy read nhi ki kyuki m busy tha apni rachna ko likhne m, lakin jab maine aapki kahani phdni start ki to rok nhi paya, aur apni kahani ko hold krke maine ye story puri read ki.

besak mujhe khna hoga aapki kahani bahut romanchak hai - Logan Bro Keep it up

maine bhi yaha xossipy pr do kahani post ki - basically wo ek hi kahani hai lakin character itne jayade the mujhe wo do thered m split krni padi.

Suhagraat - A Game of Lust

मेरी चुदक्कड़ रण्डी बिवि - लंड की पयासी

Thanks Hasirama aise comments pad kar sachmuch bahut khushi hoti hai ki mai kuchb badiya likh raha hu aur readers use dhyan se pad rahe hai.

Thanks meri story ko shuru se padne ke liye aur is nae tarah ko concert ko pasand karne ke liye. Rahi situation ki baat to mai to bus khud ko us situation me rakh kar dekhta hu aur phir jaisa mai react karunga waisa hi story ke kirdaaro ka reaction dikhata hu.
Aur hum sabme positive aur negative dono gun hote hai ye zaroori nahi ki life ki ek situation me hum positive hai to humesha positive honge waise hi agar humara koi gun negative hai jaise vikram to zaroori nahi hum puri tarah negative ho. Achha laga aap ne ise minutely observeobserve kara.

Yaha jadatar Shabana Vineeta Garima ya Neha ke fan hai achha laga ki Shobha ka bhi koi fan hai. Shobha ki story ka concept alag hai wo apne pati ke alava do parae mardo se chudwa chuki hai phir bhi andar se ab bhi pativrata hai. Jab maine shuru me kaha tha ki shobha sirf apne pati se chudegi tab readers ko bada boring laga tha par ab shayad readers ko samajh aa raha hoga ki meri baat ka kya matlab tha.

Bilkul sahi kaha witer banna ek tough kaam hai din bhar story ko lekar nae nae thoughts sochne padte hai kai thoughts dimag me ate hai par jab likhne baitho to samajh nahi ata unhe shabdo me kis tarah piroe. Kai sex scenes likhte samay ye lagta hai ki aisa kya likhe ye scene pehle likhe gae scene se alag ho. Bahut kuchh sochna padta hai. Readers ke liye wo bus chand minute me pada jane wala update hota hai par humare wo kai dino ki mehnat hoti hai.

Achha lagta hai jab koi writer apni khud ki story se samay nikal kar apki story pade aur apna feedback bhi de. As a writer mai janta hu ki apni story me hum itna jute rehte hai ki baki story padne ka samay hi nahi milta. Khushi hui ki apne apni story karke meri puri story padi.

Thoda theek hho jau phir apki story bhi zaroor padunga aur apna feedback bhi dunga. Par philhaal apki minute observation dekh kar bina pade hi bol sakta hu ki wo stories bhi kaafi dumdaar hongi.

Yaha comment karke mera utsaah badane ka bahut bahut shukriya.