28-07-2020, 09:50 PM
(28-07-2020, 07:31 AM)Gillsaab13 Wrote: First of all congo dear for your new story
Jithe tk mainu lgda tuc ohi rupinder ni jihna di ik story hr aa punjaban jattiya
Bki bht diffrnt plot le k aaye o
Eda e likhde rho bhtt sohna likh rhe o
Tuc bht vdia way nl likhde o ho ske ta dialog jyada rkheyo i mean during sex jini gl baat howe ohna maza aaunda
Bki tuc writer o jo likhoge vdia likhoge
Hun dkhde aa pind de ghr ch ki ki dkhn nu mildaa kamal wlo
Kamal da hun ki roop hou apni maa di death toh bdd lets see
Waiting for next dear
Phla 3 july nu, fir agla 25 july nu reply aya writer da. Ki kamal da aa is ch.