28-07-2020, 06:01 PM
(28-07-2020, 05:56 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Mai kahani jab likh raha tha to koi ladies careter chahiye tha jo bahot mazboot ho tab maine Phir se nazbeen ko utara par abhi zyada intrest nazbeen mai lagega jo ek kafi storng life ji rahi hai use mai involve karo aur nazbeen ko dekhkar noor bhi usi ki trah aage bade waha uski nande hai yaha Maa aur beti hai.... Agar ye plot sahi lagega to aage likhonga
Nazbeen aur Noorr alag tahara ki characters hone chaiyen bhai. Nazbeen ko la aiya wo asse hain.. Wski dedar ho jayega.. Powerfull veili lady jo aur power ke liya or hawas ke liya kiai ke niche aiyega.... Nazbeen ko dekhne ko milega.
Par Noor ko app jis andas main le raha tha asche thi. Wo bhi power hasil karegi toh ek jaisa lagenge .. Eisa ho jo wo chahegi Nazbeen ki tarah par payegi nahi....