27-07-2020, 10:49 PM
(27-07-2020, 10:08 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Isko real na pad kar bus ek fantasy ki trah treat kare aur maza le
Fantasy hj hain bhai. Story ki basis pain comment kiya tha bhai. Lekin. Parthe waqt khayal nahi rahete hain... Lagta hain real main ho rahi hain wo bhi bilkul samne . tumahara writing kuch aise hi.
Ea story pea tum jo ischa kar sakte ho ise lia ise pahelye continue karo. Aur story ko tum Secondary priority do because this one in Peak....