23-07-2020, 10:24 PM
(23-07-2020, 09:13 PM)Ravikumar528 Wrote: hhaa uska bhai dala bana kai rakho jesa apni bhen ko chuta dekta raha gaaa
hana yahe kamina pan karo saloo
etne bekkar story ja rahi hai
or writer ka hoslaaaaaa banata raho
i realy does not like this story
i really hate this story gud bya
bakwas story ka mor kameena chutiyo kaa liya likta rahoooooooooooooooo................
Bhai I appreciate your criticism...it will help me to improve...I can't disclose the story...but yes mujhe bhi lag raha hai ki story boring ja rahi hai par aage kuch interesting mod pe le Jane ke liye thoda build up chahiye....
Thanks to dislike..