22-07-2020, 10:12 PM
(This post was last modified: 26-06-2021, 12:53 PM by Hasirama007. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
Logan
I just complete your story, mujhe khna pdega, you are a amazing writer, no one can explain situation like you do, narration jo aap likhte hai wo kamaal ki hai, phdne wala koi bhi word skip nhi kr sekta.
aapki kahani m mujhe jo sabse achi baat lagi wo hai aapka ek positive massage (achai aur burai ka fark batana) dena.
xossipy k iss platform pr jaha sab apni life m se kuch kimti waqt nikal kr yaha ek aise fantasy jite hai , jisse wo kisi se share nahi krte.
aapki kahani m mera favorite character - SHOBHA the BRIDE
Best scene - Bheema - Shobha
Jab aap reader se writer bante hai to waqt aur bhi kam ho jata hai kisior ki rachna ko padhne ka, aap khud ki rachnao m ulajh kr rh jate hai,
ek lambe samay se maine koi stroy read nhi ki kyuki m busy tha apni rachna ko likhne m, lakin jab maine aapki kahani phdni start ki to rok nhi paya, aur apni kahani ko hold krke maine ye story puri read ki.
besak mujhe khna hoga aapki kahani bahut romanchak hai - Logan Bro Keep it up
I just complete your story, mujhe khna pdega, you are a amazing writer, no one can explain situation like you do, narration jo aap likhte hai wo kamaal ki hai, phdne wala koi bhi word skip nhi kr sekta.
aapki kahani m mujhe jo sabse achi baat lagi wo hai aapka ek positive massage (achai aur burai ka fark batana) dena.
xossipy k iss platform pr jaha sab apni life m se kuch kimti waqt nikal kr yaha ek aise fantasy jite hai , jisse wo kisi se share nahi krte.
aapki kahani m mera favorite character - SHOBHA the BRIDE
Best scene - Bheema - Shobha
Jab aap reader se writer bante hai to waqt aur bhi kam ho jata hai kisior ki rachna ko padhne ka, aap khud ki rachnao m ulajh kr rh jate hai,
ek lambe samay se maine koi stroy read nhi ki kyuki m busy tha apni rachna ko likhne m, lakin jab maine aapki kahani phdni start ki to rok nhi paya, aur apni kahani ko hold krke maine ye story puri read ki.
besak mujhe khna hoga aapki kahani bahut romanchak hai - Logan Bro Keep it up