[Uday]

Hi Manasi
I happened to read the story (the original and later the 2 developed ones)
I am waiting eagerly how you are going ahead with your version. 
Anyway I like your decent descriptions, views and the "2 sentences of your description where I changed the colour" is the most fitting one, even I also had enough of Manu's humiliation.
But in my view it is also one of the reasons that the story got so many followers, critics and so on as most are empathizing with Manu to some extent and made the story a success. Even someone openly admitted as his also the similar case and he accepted his wife's domination blaw..blaw..
All the best, try to start a bit early if possible.