20-07-2020, 11:23 PM
(20-07-2020, 10:24 PM)Tharki_uncle Wrote: Bhai abhi toh khel tumne shuru kiya mujhe aise lagtahe ... Noor ko sahi tarha didar karwaw hamse ... Wo toh kuchhi jalak dikha rahe puri raat ka intejaar hain noorin ji jab pakiza banke customer ke pass nakhre karega aur fir mast hoke raat bitayegi. Tum jis thara likhteho aur conversation dalteho sab Noorin ki hi dewana banegi
Ha mai agar full night noor ki de do to noor open ho jayegi isliye short encounter de raha ho jisse reader ke man mai rahe ke aur aage kuch hota adhura sa raha.... Jisee noor ka carecter se lagaw aur bade.....
Mere ek galti se sabse zyada view cmmt mil rahe the lockdown mai maine use bekar kar diya......
Kyokibtabbasum ko reader aur ap sab logo ne jaise pasand kara waise mai lamba nahi chala paya.... But jaldi use sudharonga ap aur mere bahot se reader continue mera hosla badate hai unke liye Thanxxx writer yahi chahata hai acche cmmt mile bahot time lagta hai likhne mai aur koi zyada nahi kah pata kahani ke bare mai to thoda jhatka lagta hai. ...... But mai aisa kuch likhonga jaisa aam tor par kam hota hai.... Wohi cheez agar likho to alag maza aata hai jaise ab tak maine likha sab log pasand kar rahe hai ye Accha hai.....
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