02-03-2019, 10:56 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-03-2019, 11:14 PM by love_couple. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Bravo man !!
To be honest , I started reading this story keeping in mind that this must be some another amateur story which would make me feel as if I am watching a porn where things(make out & sex) happen too quickly without logic. BUT BUT BUT .... my friend Whoa!! What a story line and the interest kept on building up as I kept on reading it .
I really appreciate your writing skills because it made me feel that the story has life in it and its based on logic. You definitely know what you are writing and it doesn't look that you believe in wham bam type of stories where sex happens among characters instantly without any logic. Its good to find that a new writer has come for whom content of the story matters the most.
Till now, the story is moving excellently and in a realistic & logical way. It has excitement as well as emotions which are must for a story to make it a success and the way you make characters converse via dialogs , it made the story so real and smooth because thats how a Bf & Gf would talk in a relationship and sometimes making them talk in Hindi was the cherry on cake.
Your writing has been full of excitement till now, keeping every reader on the excitement verge and I believe the way you are taking it ,it has a long way to go. I just request that please do not turn it into an illogical story where sex happens instantly because in real life too things happen in a slow procedure only.
Honestly , till now I used to come only for the stories of the author "krish_999" because for me he has been the best author on the xossip or elsewhere , but now your story too is added in my list and I am very curious to know how the story would proceed.
We all readers are very anticipated to know whats gonna happen next when parul goes for a movie with her new friend. I hope the story moves on in a systematic and logical way as it has till now.
Kudos to your writing man.. I feel thankful that I randomly started reading this story. I simply lovedddd your story which is full of realistic conversation , story line,excitement & emotions.
waiting for the update.....please just don't ditch the story in between as most writers do. tc
To be honest , I started reading this story keeping in mind that this must be some another amateur story which would make me feel as if I am watching a porn where things(make out & sex) happen too quickly without logic. BUT BUT BUT .... my friend Whoa!! What a story line and the interest kept on building up as I kept on reading it .
I really appreciate your writing skills because it made me feel that the story has life in it and its based on logic. You definitely know what you are writing and it doesn't look that you believe in wham bam type of stories where sex happens among characters instantly without any logic. Its good to find that a new writer has come for whom content of the story matters the most.
Till now, the story is moving excellently and in a realistic & logical way. It has excitement as well as emotions which are must for a story to make it a success and the way you make characters converse via dialogs , it made the story so real and smooth because thats how a Bf & Gf would talk in a relationship and sometimes making them talk in Hindi was the cherry on cake.
Your writing has been full of excitement till now, keeping every reader on the excitement verge and I believe the way you are taking it ,it has a long way to go. I just request that please do not turn it into an illogical story where sex happens instantly because in real life too things happen in a slow procedure only.
Honestly , till now I used to come only for the stories of the author "krish_999" because for me he has been the best author on the xossip or elsewhere , but now your story too is added in my list and I am very curious to know how the story would proceed.
We all readers are very anticipated to know whats gonna happen next when parul goes for a movie with her new friend. I hope the story moves on in a systematic and logical way as it has till now.
Kudos to your writing man.. I feel thankful that I randomly started reading this story. I simply lovedddd your story which is full of realistic conversation , story line,excitement & emotions.
waiting for the update.....please just don't ditch the story in between as most writers do. tc
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