16-07-2020, 09:17 AM
(16-07-2020, 07:36 AM)Rancour Wrote: I read the story till now.
The turnaround has a solid pinch of reality and has put the story on track.It is vital that you should have a freedom to write irrespective of myriads of advisors because the way you fantasize a sexual scene is beyond comparison .
Also every writer has an episode of mental block at some phase of writing . You can overcome it by abhorrence for a week or two from writing to increase your appetite and decrease the threshold of adrenaline rush that one has while exploring the realms of deep fantasy.
And above all while reading your valid eroticism , the most beneficial thing is that lockdown has become a taboo element in itself to most readers. The readers need this sort of writing and eroticism to overcome the boredom of lockdown and makes me feel as if I am in a dreamy world.
So take your time and keep up the good job.
Also a request to keep posting good images as they add spice to your writing and all previous ones whose link is not responding so as to help new discoverers of your terrific writing
Yes bro.. Mai kuch story aise hi shuru kar deta ho par jab likhta rahta ho tab us story ko sajata ho... But bich mai.. Kisi wazah se lamba chala gaya aur jo likhne ki power hai mere mai loss kar gaya aur ye kahani trake se bhatak gayi par ise mai Phir se come back karonga aur ye carecter Tabbasum ka mai iram jaise nahi to nazbeen jaise banaonga... Wohi soch raha ho aur uske andar Phir se apni normal life mai aaane ka moka donga..... Par kaise bus yahi deemag kam nahi kar raha hai kuch idea hai mere pass iske liye Tabbasum ko bhar lockdown mai nikalna hi padega.......