15-07-2020, 03:58 PM
Awesome ending of the story bro. Nice twists while ending the story and I like the way Vinay giving clarity about how they lived and how they have to do.
As-usual, I'm waiting for your new story.
I give my suggestion as first start with 1 and then go with 2 as 1 is Murder mystery, after that we can enjoy the periodical love story.
As-usual, I'm waiting for your new story.
I give my suggestion as first start with 1 and then go with 2 as 1 is Murder mystery, after that we can enjoy the periodical love story.
Respect everyone 
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My first story: ప్రేమ+పగ=జీవితం
. Give respect to writers in this site. Give a best complement to get more updates from them, and don't insult them. My first story: ప్రేమ+పగ=జీవితం
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