banarsi panwala by Pinkbabu

[sarit11]

vibrantlyvikrant

Bhai ab nishit ke man ye daalo ki neha ka kisi aur ke sath SEX nhi karna kyuki chedilal bhi nhi hai
Aur savi ko naukaani se nikal ke jagya ko rakh lo. Aur jagya aur neha ke aur session bdhao.
Ek lamba SEX session karao neha aur jagya ka. Nishit ko kaam mai busy kar do.. thoda SEX bdhao yaar.

SEX KI KAMI HAI YAAR. Jagya upar se upar se SEX kar rha hai. Thoda hardcore lao
Jagya ki bas ki nhi hai tu main hero paanwala se karao. kab tak gaon mai rahega. Yaar pics bhi daal diya karo neha ki.
Suggestions from my side. Don't apply if u have another plot. But plz atleast think about it once

Studxyz
आह भाई क्या गरमा गर्म कहानी लिखते हो के लण्ड में विस्फोट करवा देते हो. अति कामुक, अति उत्तेजित, और बेइंतेहा हवस और लालसा से भरी हुई कहानी है | जिस में की एक घरेलू औरत अपनी काम वासना के आवेश में आ कर सब के नीचे लेट जा रही है व् मस्त चुदाई करवा रही है | और इसका पति भी बखूबी साथ दे रहा है

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agoodfriend

Kya hua PB saahib...koi pressure hai kya?

Bahut honestly boloon to ye wala update mujhe aapkk writing style laga hi nahi....aapka sabse bada plus point hai....aapka seduction
Aapki heroines ki aaj tak jitni bhi chudaiyan hui hain....un main se sabse kamzor chudai thi aaj
Bina kisi seduction me...bina pataye...Neha aise hi chuda gayi wo pandit ke naukar se....
I m sorry to say...but ye aapki writing nahi hai
Itna asaan hota to chhedi kabbbb ka chod chuka hota ya chhotu kab ka chod chuka hota
Yahan per aisi bahut bahut bahut saari stroy hain jinmain sirf seedhi seedhi chudai hoti hai
Kaise hua iska bharpoor vistrat varnan karna aapki anokhi unique writing style hai
Jisko padte samay padne wala us story main kho jata hai...jaise sab kuchh uski aankho ke saamne chal raha ho
Agar aise hi koi casual sex karana tha to Neha ko uske sasur ya koi uncle se chudwa dete
Ths is my honest opinion ki chundi lal ke character se hum apne ko jod nahi paaye
Shayed meri baat se kaafi log sahmat honge
Meri baat main kuchh bhi bura lage to plzz mujhe maaf karna
But...still....thank u soooo much fr ur kind efforts n waiting fr more n more

thanks friend for such a keen observation of my threads and such a good analysis of my story


its ok if you feel that it was not an upto mark update

i will try more to be a good writer dear

anyways thanks

i will wait for more of ur critic eye


pinkbabu