14-07-2020, 01:39 PM
(14-07-2020, 09:15 AM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Ha veil n full dress burkha mai aage ke carecter aayenge noor ke abhi surver ke karan hi mai pura nahi likh paya
You created an awesome character of NOOR. She was pious lady actually in my thinking girls are sexy in two type of dress either saree or veil-burkha.. Those two are different type but has same attraction.. Though NOOR is a veili let her be that way ( depends on you) . Your agency idea was great also
Your are so good at plot writing and creating atmosphere of sex..
Keep writing as your wish, we have faith on you since nazbeen.. After nazbeen and irum this character has many angle and I like this most