14-07-2020, 12:13 PM
The Unwanted Houseguest by Indiansubmale a tribute
Finally I have decided to give this story a decent finish. Not like nobody tried to achieve this. amethyst1982 has made an attempt. Subsequently, Breville1 actually had finished it. My search for Kavita’s motive could not be fulfilled. Aberration to her behaviour remained elusive.
All along, I had been baffled with the story. To some extent it appeared to be realistic. This is apparently, a forced cuckold story, where Manu is forced to submit under pressure to accept his wife’s blatant adultery.
The writer indicated the span of seven months. In due course of life, he was found to be healthy and successful in life.
How story continued from the point Indiansubmale abandoned is anybody’s imagination.
We had very clear mindset about Manu and his predicaments to accept the incidents leading to his forced submission into cuckoldry. He was full of fear and anxiety. One moment he accepts his inadequacy and inferiority over Prem. The next moment he is enthusiastic of reclaiming his wife. Not to accept defeat before death. He is under continual turmoil of positive and negative feelings. His character is well defined. In future he was successful in life. Nobody with so much fear and anxiety can be successful in life. It’s cannot be miracle.
Prem character is also well defined and crystal clear. He is physically strong with immense sexual power. He is arrogant, selfish, womanizer, pervert with sadist mentality.
Gowrie is not well defined. She is a tamil woman (May be *****) staying in Bangalore alone on job. So she is sort of independent woman. Her behaviour against Manu’s phone call draws suspicion. Engaging in 3 some sex with her fiancé’s lover, Kavita in presence of Kavita’s husband raises doubt. We have seen her always dressing conservatively.
We have no insight of Kavita’s thinking. However, we have following details:
She had pre-marriage physical relationship with Prem.
She loves children.
She is sexually starved.
She is exhibitionist.
She is trying to manipulate Manu in effeminacy & cuckolding.
She does not want to desert Manu from her life. She was not contemplating divorce.
She is afraid of Prem’s bossism.
The questions are:
Is she promiscuous or sex maniac?
Is she pervert and sadist?
What is her motive?
Why did she not divorce Manu?
Why she had to dress obscenely outside, knowing very well her social image will obliterate?
Why she had to engage in 3 some with Prem’s fiancé.
Why she resorted to intimacy and sex in front of outsiders. (A/c crew) She resorted into a very risky encounter. How this does help her in achieving her goal.
Why she selected Prem? Is it only because of her earlier acquaintance with him or something else?
And many more.
I will try to find out logical answers to all above in my attempt to finish the story. I have sketched outline for a decent logical ending. This will help me not to veer around under pressure. There will not be any explicit raw sexual description. No more humiliation. I had enough. I look forward to begin by Oct 2020 and finish by year end.
Finally I have decided to give this story a decent finish. Not like nobody tried to achieve this. amethyst1982 has made an attempt. Subsequently, Breville1 actually had finished it. My search for Kavita’s motive could not be fulfilled. Aberration to her behaviour remained elusive.
All along, I had been baffled with the story. To some extent it appeared to be realistic. This is apparently, a forced cuckold story, where Manu is forced to submit under pressure to accept his wife’s blatant adultery.
The writer indicated the span of seven months. In due course of life, he was found to be healthy and successful in life.
How story continued from the point Indiansubmale abandoned is anybody’s imagination.
We had very clear mindset about Manu and his predicaments to accept the incidents leading to his forced submission into cuckoldry. He was full of fear and anxiety. One moment he accepts his inadequacy and inferiority over Prem. The next moment he is enthusiastic of reclaiming his wife. Not to accept defeat before death. He is under continual turmoil of positive and negative feelings. His character is well defined. In future he was successful in life. Nobody with so much fear and anxiety can be successful in life. It’s cannot be miracle.
Prem character is also well defined and crystal clear. He is physically strong with immense sexual power. He is arrogant, selfish, womanizer, pervert with sadist mentality.
Gowrie is not well defined. She is a tamil woman (May be *****) staying in Bangalore alone on job. So she is sort of independent woman. Her behaviour against Manu’s phone call draws suspicion. Engaging in 3 some sex with her fiancé’s lover, Kavita in presence of Kavita’s husband raises doubt. We have seen her always dressing conservatively.
We have no insight of Kavita’s thinking. However, we have following details:
She had pre-marriage physical relationship with Prem.
She loves children.
She is sexually starved.
She is exhibitionist.
She is trying to manipulate Manu in effeminacy & cuckolding.
She does not want to desert Manu from her life. She was not contemplating divorce.
She is afraid of Prem’s bossism.
The questions are:
Is she promiscuous or sex maniac?
Is she pervert and sadist?
What is her motive?
Why did she not divorce Manu?
Why she had to dress obscenely outside, knowing very well her social image will obliterate?
Why she had to engage in 3 some with Prem’s fiancé.
Why she resorted to intimacy and sex in front of outsiders. (A/c crew) She resorted into a very risky encounter. How this does help her in achieving her goal.
Why she selected Prem? Is it only because of her earlier acquaintance with him or something else?
And many more.
I will try to find out logical answers to all above in my attempt to finish the story. I have sketched outline for a decent logical ending. This will help me not to veer around under pressure. There will not be any explicit raw sexual description. No more humiliation. I had enough. I look forward to begin by Oct 2020 and finish by year end.