banarsi panwala by Pinkbabu

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Originally Posted by Ramesh1990
Dear pinkbabu:

Mujhe aapka last update bahot acchha laga - iss me kaafi eroticism raha. Khaaskar, heroine ki duvidha, before taking the final plunge - ye sab - bahot honehar dhang se aapne nibhaya hai. Ye low class high class - kahaniki plot me pehle se hi built in hai. And after all, this is a fantasy. So no problem if you are carrying on with that. Maybe later on, when you start writing on an original theme, you can incorporate other type of pairings. Khair, ye jaise hai, waise hi rehne do.

Aur ek khas baat ye ki, aapne kahaniki rhythm ko excellent timing diya hai - neither too fast nor too slow (to lose reader interest) - just the way it should be - mere hisabse. Writing is a strenuous exercise and creative flows per hamesha apna control nahin banta. To, chhota ho ya bada, jitna updating aapko natural lagta hai - utna hi maintain karo - sirf updating regular hona chahiye. Also, one can never satisfy all the readers simply because each one fantasizes in their unique manner. But writer ko apne maarg per date rehna jaruri hai.

Lastly, a piece of advice for you (you may toss this to the dustbin if it doesn't apply to you). Sometimes, I have observed writers getting serious about addressing the concerns of the readers and in the process losing their way. If I were you, I would (definitely) take note of their comments and suggestions, prepare and post the next update and only thereafter respond to them. That's the way I do. But it is all up to you.

Aapka is prayas ke liye subhkamnayen.