Romance Dr. Revati

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Kartik ko revti ke sath najdikiya badhao or rudra ko un dono se jalao

Maja aa gaya..... Please update more regularly

Badhiya ja tahe ho bhai bas thora update jaldi do

Phele kartik or revati k nazdikya badhao phir
Rudra se uski frndshp uske baad kartik ko cuckold krdo

Nice update. Nicely going. Agar revati ko apni galti ka ehsas hota he to kahani ka main plot hi khatam ho jata he. Main chahata hu kahani aur age bare. Revati aur kartik ka closenees bare fir use ehsas ho apni galti ka.

Very nice written story...

Bro bas ek suggestion tha...ki dono ko ek room me lock karwa diya jaye...aur wahan unki misunderstanding door hone ka pehla step shru ho..just a single thought

Mind blowing update bro
Story me characters ke bich me jalan, love, sadness, happiness, afsos, junun sb dikh rha h jhaa rudra ko ab apna goal smjh aa gya h ki vo clg me kisliye aaya tha whi revati ka Kartik ko leke jo dream thaa vo bhi sach hota dikh rha h or Kartik ka revati ko pane kaa junun bhi dikh rha h. Bhut accha plot ke sath likh rhe ho aise he likhte rho mujhe bs itna pta h ki abhi bhi story start he ho rhi h iska end abhi bhut dur h inme abhi itni aasani se revati ko rudra kr sath mt milana n toh story pe vo plot khatam ho jayega jisko pdkr maja aa rha h

It's my opinion ???

Hi writer saab. Bahut hi unique story h specially plot. COLLEGE LIFE of doctors. Bahut si story h college n hostel pr but not on mbbs students.
Anyway gud writing, suspence, romance, action, sex sare elements hai jo apki story ko alag n bahter sabit kr rahi h aur readers bhi bahut like kr rahe h, sayad esiliye suggestion b de rahe h apko. But last update ke baad auditore035 aur pamit453 ne sahi kaha h. Reveti pyar krne lagi h kartik ko n kartik b uske sath jutha natak kr raha h to rudra ya kisi aur ki baat revati es stage pr jabki uske sath kuch galat nahi huwa hai, wo kyu manegi at least tab tak to nahi jab tak kartik uske sath relation banakr breakup na kr le. So i guess kartik n revati ka relation long n sex se bhara hoga aftrall revati is heroine of story n kartik use etni jaldi n asani se one tym use kr ke ditch nahi karega. Aur jab kartik dhoka dega tab rudra sayad revati ka hath tham le. Kartik b revati ke sahare shantanu n rudra ko puri college life me daba kr rakh sakta h.
Par age kahani ko aap kis tarah laoge ye to aap hi jante ho. Hope story ki excitement barkarar rahegi end tak. Keep posting update regularly and soon. Thanks for a gud story..

Hi writer saab. Bahut hi unique story h specially plot. COLLEGE LIFE of doctors. Bahut si story h college n hostel pr but not on mbbs students.
Anyway gud writing, suspence, romance, action, sex sare elements hai jo apki story ko alag n bahter sabit kr rahi h aur readers bhi bahut like kr rahe h, sayad esiliye suggestion b de rahe h apko. But last update ke baad auditore035 aur pamit453 ne sahi kaha h. Reveti pyar krne lagi h kartik ko n kartik b uske sath jutha natak kr raha h to rudra ya kisi aur ki baat revati es stage pr jabki uske sath kuch galat nahi huwa hai, wo kyu manegi at least tab tak to nahi jab tak kartik uske sath relation banakr breakup na kr le. So i guess kartik n revati ka relation long n sex se bhara hoga aftrall revati is heroine of story n kartik use etni jaldi n asani se one tym use kr ke ditch nahi karega. Aur jab kartik dhoka dega tab rudra sayad revati ka hath tham le. Kartik b revati ke sahare shantanu n rudra ko puri college life me daba kr rakh sakta h.
Par age kahani ko aap kis tarah laoge ye to aap hi jante ho. Hope story ki excitement barkarar rahegi end tak. Keep posting update regularly and soon. Thanks for a gud story..

Bhai suggetion acha hai lekin ye writer kisi ke suggetion per gour nahi farmata

Update please. Kartik is waiting.

Waiting bro

Thnx guys update will come shortly.