07-07-2020, 01:58 PM
(07-07-2020, 12:08 PM)rafiqshaikh9059 Wrote: Bhai aap ka likhne ka tajurba mujh se kahi jyada hai aap master ho magar aapne kahani ki main heroin ko sharif gharane ki housewife bata diya aur 3 update bad hi wo do mardo se chudwane ko dulhan ban gayi us sharif housewife ki sharafat par shaq ho gaya ...isliye kahani me gadbad ho gayi agar uski sharafat dhire dhire kum hoti to bat kuch aur hoti ye meri akele ki rai hai .....
Maine yahi likha ki galti ho gayi.... Suhagrat ka Sean nahi likhna chahiye tha agar apne mera cmmt sahi se pada ho to wohi likha