07-07-2020, 12:08 PM
(06-07-2020, 09:29 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Kahani kabhi comp hi nahi hoti mai lockdown ko aage likhna hi nahi chahata tha par Phir bhi ek suhagrat wala Sean dal kar thoda mai hi thoda nirash ho gaya ye sean ki koi zaroorat hi nahi thi.... Kyoki ek kahani likhta ho to zyada cmmt nahi aate to use likhne ka dil hi nahi karta iske liye maine dusri aate hi chalu kari...... Rahi teesri Baat ki budda kaka wali mai ise mange kar longa kyoki mere reader aur ap ko roz hi teeno mai se kisi na kisi ka update milta rahega.... Lockdown ko kaise dubara patri par lao samjh nahi aaraha woh suhagrat wala Sean dalkar galti kar gaya
Bhai aap ka likhne ka tajurba mujh se kahi jyada hai aap master ho magar aapne kahani ki main heroin ko sharif gharane ki housewife bata diya aur 3 update bad hi wo do mardo se chudwane ko dulhan ban gayi us sharif housewife ki sharafat par shaq ho gaya ...isliye kahani me gadbad ho gayi agar uski sharafat dhire dhire kum hoti to bat kuch aur hoti ye meri akele ki rai hai .....