06-07-2020, 05:55 PM
(06-07-2020, 02:54 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Ha ye story nahi band kar raha par kahani ke hisab se maine bhi relise kara ki suhagrat ka Sean nahi jam raha tha par ye Sean to pura karna hi padega uske bad kahani mai kuch alag turn longa ab jaha zyada mere ab teen kahani chal rahi hai waha zyada positive cmmt raha woh likhta rahonga ya ek ek din chhodkar teeno kahaniyo ka update likhonga bud ye suhagrat ka jaldi ek hi updte mai khatam kar ke Phir isi kahani ko thoda alag trah se likhonga jaha sex ke sath sath kuch story bhi bade
Bhai ek salah dunga aap great writer ho magar 3 kahaniya ek sath likhoge to koi bhi kahani ke sath insaf nahi kar paoge ek hi kahani par focus rakho use jald hi pura kar do ..aur uske bad koi nayi kahani likho...
jab mai shabana wali kahani likh raha tha tabhi mujhe saniya wali kahani ka idea aaya tha ..magar maine shabana ki kahani complet ki uske bad saniya likhi ......