06-07-2020, 11:39 AM
(05-07-2020, 11:05 PM)Uday Wrote: Hi bro
All well when it ends well. Nice finish and a happy ending
But you know by reading the mating scenes between Swetha and Shiva the excitement builds up is not that much when reading the same between wife and husband. May be this is perversion
But a story is a story and you did all the justice what a parent can do to his child.
See you with another story.
By the way you didn't answer my question asked earlier...are you by any means going to translate your other story " He She Husband"
I did this story because it was a relatively short story and time available to me permitted me to be able to complete this. He, She, Husband is much longer than this and I won't be able to do that. Moreover when time permits I was debating whether to do a completely new story rather than a translation of an earlier story.