05-07-2020, 12:23 AM
Hi writer saab. Bahut hi unique story h specially plot. COLLEGE LIFE of doctors. Bahut si story h college n hostel pr but not on mbbs students.
Anyway gud writing, suspence, romance, action, sex sare elements hai jo apki story ko alag n bahter sabit kr rahi h aur readers bhi bahut like kr rahe h, sayad esiliye suggestion b de rahe h apko. But last update ke baad auditore035 aur pamit453 ne sahi kaha h. Reveti pyar krne lagi h kartik ko n kartik b uske sath jutha natak kr raha h to rudra ya kisi aur ki baat revati es stage pr jabki uske sath kuch galat nahi huwa hai, wo kyu manegi at least tab tak to nahi jab tak kartik uske sath relation banakr breakup na kr le. So i guess kartik n revati ka relation long n sex se bhara hoga aftrall revati is heroine of story n kartik use etni jaldi n asani se one tym use kr ke ditch nahi karega. Aur jab kartik dhoka dega tab rudra sayad revati ka hath tham le. Kartik b revati ke sahare shantanu n rudra ko puri college life me daba kr rakh sakta h.
Par age kahani ko aap kis tarah laoge ye to aap hi jante ho. Hope story ki excitement barkarar rahegi end tak. Keep posting update regularly and soon. Thanks for a gud story..
Anyway gud writing, suspence, romance, action, sex sare elements hai jo apki story ko alag n bahter sabit kr rahi h aur readers bhi bahut like kr rahe h, sayad esiliye suggestion b de rahe h apko. But last update ke baad auditore035 aur pamit453 ne sahi kaha h. Reveti pyar krne lagi h kartik ko n kartik b uske sath jutha natak kr raha h to rudra ya kisi aur ki baat revati es stage pr jabki uske sath kuch galat nahi huwa hai, wo kyu manegi at least tab tak to nahi jab tak kartik uske sath relation banakr breakup na kr le. So i guess kartik n revati ka relation long n sex se bhara hoga aftrall revati is heroine of story n kartik use etni jaldi n asani se one tym use kr ke ditch nahi karega. Aur jab kartik dhoka dega tab rudra sayad revati ka hath tham le. Kartik b revati ke sahare shantanu n rudra ko puri college life me daba kr rakh sakta h.
Par age kahani ko aap kis tarah laoge ye to aap hi jante ho. Hope story ki excitement barkarar rahegi end tak. Keep posting update regularly and soon. Thanks for a gud story..