Adultery An innocent girl manipulated by blacktigereyez
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One of the best stories currently running on Exbi - well written and very erotic.
Mazza aa gaya!!!!!

But enough of teasing now. Let someone "plunge" into action - koun hoga pata nahi - hopefully not her boss - Gawde? mmmmmm, Sharmaji? mmmmmmm ----- I think Gawde sounds fun - an accountant - its unexpected and naughty and kinky - let it happen on a hot humid weekend among those dusty files.
But you are the boss so you will decide.

Don't get sidetracked by loose comments - too many writers get engaged with side comments and loose motivation - your writing skills are great and you have succeeded in keeing your audience on the edge.

waiting or the next few updates (I like that your updates are substantial and try to complete the whole scene - not part-by-part - even if the gap between updates is a week or so)
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RE: An innocent girl manipulated - by jtiwary - 23-04-2020, 08:12 AM
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RE: An innocent girl manipulated - by sarit11 - 23-06-2020, 08:50 AM
RE: An innocent girl manipulated - by sarit11 - 23-06-2020, 08:51 AM
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