Adultery An innocent girl manipulated by blacktigereyez

[sarit11]

Ramlal should be the first as he was the first to seduce her fully and was just entering her apartment..as he was denied on that moment, you should give him the first chance...

New characters like the Security guard of Dipti's apartment, Ramlal's friend,tailors,shopkeepers etc can be introduced.

After Ramlal, the security guard is preferable..

Hi Tiger, your story is going great but I totally agree with tanuBhai, make her succumb to the lowly people like mentioned by TanuBhai......And make it a seduction do not try to show her as a willing partner....

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