29-06-2020, 01:12 PM
Hi Bro
Just finished reading your last update.
Very well narrated the dialogues and the organized characterization. The way the character speaks, we can see the personality of the character.
Also the way male & female reactions having faced the same situation is well described.
Now as Husband (Mahesh) came to the rescue of his wife (Swetha) and the predator (Shiva) is not a person who let the hook off so easily on his prey (Swetha), it is quite interesting to see how mahesh is going to send him (Shiva) off permanently from their life.
Kudos bro.
Just finished reading your last update.
Very well narrated the dialogues and the organized characterization. The way the character speaks, we can see the personality of the character.
Also the way male & female reactions having faced the same situation is well described.
Now as Husband (Mahesh) came to the rescue of his wife (Swetha) and the predator (Shiva) is not a person who let the hook off so easily on his prey (Swetha), it is quite interesting to see how mahesh is going to send him (Shiva) off permanently from their life.
Kudos bro.
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